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Wow, I don't know whats better. That Negroni or your draft!
There's not much, if anything, to improve.
I centered it a little more and "figgled" a bit with the "the".
But I dont't know. The 'e' is tuff and your "plaintext" version harmonizes more with the "Est..." footnote.
+ _. --- ._ ' .
.-'` ``. '-. .
. .' `.===-' '='.
' ___ /_ __ ' +
_ _ _ ( / / //=_ _ __
( / ) )o / o / _/_ ( / ) /
/ / /, __/ ,_ , _, /_ / /--', , /
/ / (_(_(_/_/ /_(_(_)_/ /_(__ / (_/_/_)
/| - Est. 2020
. . (/ .-.
' .-'=. ' '
'.-. `, .'.'
* ' -. ___ .-
*
Edit: euromancer's idea for the 'i's crosse my mind to...
+ _. --- ._ ' .
.-'` ``. '-. .
. .' `.===-' '='.
' ___ /_ __ ' +
_ _ _ ( / / //=_ _ __
( / ) ) o / o / _/_ ( / ) /
/ / / , __/ ,_ , _, /_ / /--', , /
/ / (_(_(_/_/ /_(_(_)_/ /_(__ / (_/_/_)
/| - Est. 2020
. . (/ .-.
' .-'=. ' '
'.-. `, .'.'
* ' -. ___ .-
*
Edit: Just me or are the 'i's in the first one taking a wizz to the left and flashing their buttocks in the second? :)
Yeah, I think plaintext the looked better. Although that moon is *terrific*
Edit: as well as the t rocket and smoke clouds, although they'd make the sign too big
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